Death
Watch,
the second in Jim Kelly’s police
procedural series featuring DI
Peter Shaw and DS George
Valentine, is
now published (Penguin, Paperback
Original, £7.99, February 2010). Head for the
nearest bookshop or press the
buy button without delay. The author’s first series,
featuring journalist
Philip Dryden and set in the Fens, won the CWA
Dagger in the Library award in 2006, and
the film rights for Death Wore White are under option.
It’s not
hard to see why. Full of action, full of atmosphere, and with memorable
characters, Jim Kelly’s novels make compulsive reading. In Death
Watch
Bryan Judd is found
murdered in
a hospital incinerator, eighteen years to the day after his twin sister
Norma
Jean disappeared. A connection? Shaw and Valentine, still pursuing the
unfinished business that lay between them in Death
Wore White, find themselves grappling
with an increasingly nightmarish situation.
Q. I found it
fascinating that you’re a lover of the Golden Age of
crime writing and the novels of Dorothy Sayers and Edmund Crispin, but
the
Shaw–Valentine novels are police procedurals set in a very
real and believable
world. You write on your website that the Dryden novels and the first
Shaw
novel incorporate a sense of the Golden Age era. Do you think this is
as true
in Death Watch? And if so, is this a conscious consideration
of
yours when planning the novel, or the way it comes out as the writing
progresses?
The
shadow cast by the Golden Age is a long
one. In some ways my books are a reaction against the classic puzzle
whodunit
formula, in that I try to make the plotting realistic, and I try to
deliver a
denouement that is believable – less possible, more probable.
So you are right
about Death Watch. But what I love
about the classics of the genre is the sense of claustrophobia that you
get –
the suspects all brought together in one setting, such as the country
house. So
what I did in Death Watch was to
try
and create a modern-day version of the country house. I ended up with a
mystery
set in a working class street. It’s summer, so front doors
stand open, and
there’s plenty of street life. There’s the church
on the corner, the
laundrette, the pub, and the nearby docks. I wanted it to feel a bit
like a
Cluedo board – with the characters moving from house to
house, not room to
room, sharing their lives in a tight-knit community. That’s
the Golden Age
aspect of the book – plus a couple of puzzles!
Q. Death
Watch is a long way in style from Sayers’ The
Nine Tailors
which you say on your website was very much a
life-changing book for
you. Did you mean that it set you on the path to writing crime or that
it
shaped the way you wrote? (And will Shaw and Valentine be bell-ringing
one of
these days?)
Well,
The
Nine Tailors did change my life – and while that
sounds like a cliché, it
isn’t. I ring bells for a hobby, I live in the Fens where the book was set,
and I write crime thrillers – three aspects of my life which
all go back to
reading this wonderful book when I was ten. You are absolutely right
that no
one reading Death Watch today would
think it was inspired by The Nine Tailors.
But there are subtle echoes, I think
–
for example, both books reek of the same Gothic atmosphere, and both
are rooted
in very particular landscapes:
The Nine Tailors in the Black Fen, Death Watch in the decaying urban
townscape of Lynn, and along the lonely Norfolk coast.
Q. Atmosphere is very
important in your novels: the
Dryden novels are set in the Fens and you take us to
the
north Norfolk coast for Shaw and
Valentine. The beach scenes in Death Watch particularly
impressed me in the way you treat them as Shaw’s
‘escape’ from the ghastliness of his work,
particularly in this case. Does the
beach carry more meaning for you than the Norfolk inland?
Beaches
are very special places for me. I
think it is because I was very happy as a child on holiday. It was the
only
time in the year when we were all together properly as a family because
Dad was
a detective at Scotland Yard and worked just about non-stop. One of the
things
we lose when we get older is an ability to live in the moment, which is
second
nature to children, if not first nature. But I still find I can forget
the
world on a beach,
not in the trite sense
of ‘escaping’, but in that I don’t think
about time, I’m just there, and I make
the most of it.. Luckily my daughter is still of an age to enjoy the North Norfolk sands – and we
both have wetsuits ! I can recall as a teenager, when I had a string of
jobs on
beaches, spending a whole afternoon-off sitting on a rock waiting for
the tide
to turn the rock into an island. Bliss.
Q. Shaw and
Valentine’s investigation takes them beyond the original
case of Bryan Judd’s death and his twin’s earlier
disappearance, although this
mystery hangs over the novel throughout. Would you ever now want to
write a
straight whodunit, having tasted the relative freedom that a thriller
provides?
The
intoxicating drug which you taste with
the thriller is, I think, the ability to inject pace into the
narrative. I love
this. But the way in which my books develop is very organic –
which as you know
is a posh way of saying I don’t know what’s going
to happen either. So some of
the plots lend themselves to a thriller development and others
don’t. I have a
very flimsy grip on my place in any particular genre, so I probably
cross the
line between the whodunit and the thriller and back to a mystery
several times
in each book. I think one of the bad things about the Golden Age is
predictability. Playing multi-genre games with the reader is one way of
keeping
the reader guessing.
Q. You quote on your
website (www.jim-kelly.co.uk)
from John Dickson Carr’s The Hollow Man that the solution
of a crime novel is not a matter of being
probable, it just has to be possible. In the case of Death
Watch
being possible was quite enough for me
– otherwise I’d never go to Norfolk again! But
seriously, do
you think Carr’s maxim stands for a crime as chillingly awful
as that in Death Watch?
I
think the great writers of the Golden Age
took this position – that the solution to their puzzles just
had to be possible
– in the spirit of the parlour game.
It
is not a sustainable view in a world where readers demand a more
authentic
feel. While I hope some aspects of the books are fantastic, in the
sense of the
landscape, and the Gothic atmosphere, I don’t believe readers
today are going
to take the solutions involving biddable snakes, or twins, or smoke and
mirrors. I think
you can still set puzzles,
but you need to have the kind of solution which makes the reader think:
‘Of
course – that’s so simple!’ Needless to
say finding such solutions as you well know is very difficult
– but it’s worth
the journey. Oddly, I think the best example of such a solution is in The Hollow Man – not the main
plot, but
the sub-plot, involving the man shot in the street. I won’t
give anything away
– but the simplicity of that solution is gem-like. And the
solution to The Nine Tailors
can be completely summarised in one sentence. And –
while
I’m on the subject – the last episode I saw of Jonathan Creek involved
a seemingly impossible puzzle about a room in an attic of an old house.
The
solution was very simple.
Q. Your father was a
police detective and your grandfather a policeman
at the time of the Sydney Street Siege. Did you
grow up on
a diet of crime stories or was it rather the opposite; a deliberate
silence
that made you all the more keen to find out about police work?
Shaw’s father,
also a police detective, tells his son he can do anything he likes in
life but
not follow him into the police – was that the atmosphere, if
not the actual
advice, of your own experience?
I was
told at an early age I could do
anything I liked with my life except
become a police officer. Dad felt he worked far too hard, far too long,
for the
rewards that he got. Having said that I think he loved every minute of
it, just
about. But he did feel that the life he saw – effectively London’s low-life,
was one which could drag you down. He tried very hard to protect us
– I’m one
of three boys – from that kind of life. I never wanted to be
a policeman
because by the time I was old enough to consider careers it
wasn’t seen as very
‘cool’ and I’d taken on a fashionable
Left-wing dislike of the police in
general. But I did become a journalist – and I had a lot to
talk to Dad about,
because I was inhabiting, to some extent, a similar world.
Q. You write in your
web biography that you always wanted to write –
was crime your first choice or did you come to it gradually?
It’s been said,
and I echo it, that your writing style is not only full of pace and
drama
but poetic
– did you ever get drawn to
writing poetry, or was it the story angle that attracted you most?
I
have always liked poetic language – but I
don’t think I’m a poet. I love the freedom of the
poetic image, but I don’t
think that I’m ever trying to get to some hidden greater
truth by using it. My
first written page – on a Brother typewriter – was
a science fiction novel
called The Gospel According to Judas.
I never got past the second page. I was a working journalist from 1978
until
2003, and so I was using words, and telling stories, every day. Crime
fiction
was a natural home for me, because it is plot-led, like journalism. But
it is a
wonderful irony that the restrictions of the genre mean that you can
play
freely at its margins – by that I mean I can indulge, for
example, my love of
describing landscape. If I wrote a novel about landscape it would be a
disaster
– this way the crime plot sort of carries all the other
luggage I like to take
with me when writing. You can see this happening with many crime
writers, who
achieve this with much more panache than I
– for example, Ian Rankin’s ability to
describe Scottish society, while
telling a gripping story at the same time.
Q. Are you one of
those lucky writers whose prose comes out on screen
or paper almost in final form, or do you polish and polish and polish
to
achieve such magnificent effects?
I
probably rewrite the whole thing three
times – having rewritten two or three times on the go. But I
have always
noticed that the pieces I write quickly, that just seem to exist
independently
in my head before I touch the keyboard, are often the best passages. I
try hard
sometimes not to rewrite beyond a certain point because there is a
dreadful
moment, always, when you just know things are getting worse, not
better. I also
have a trick which you may well have tried yourself. While I have a
‘target’
for the number of words I write in a day, usually 500 words, if I cut
some
previously written text then I treat the words lost as added. So if I
cut 1,000
words – that is two days work done! This encourages editing,
which is the best
way to improve my writing.
Q. You write in an
‘ivory tower’, or in your case ivory shed, on an
allotment. Does this always
work as an
inducement to concentrated writing or do you find yourself tempted to
rush out
and dig potatoes every so often?
I am
never tempted to dig. Most days when I
can get out on to the land I will make myself do twenty minutes digging
before
I start writing, and then twenty minutes at the end. Digging
– despite being
hard work – is actually an ideal pursuit first thing because
it is difficult to
do it wrong. So it can be chalked up as a ‘win’
before the writing day begins.
It puts me on an upward psychological path.
Physical exercise is a very good warm-up session for me
because it also
squeezes out stress, and leaves me feeling settled, rather than fidgety. This winter has been a bit frosty in
the hut, despite having a huge double-paraffin heater, but I can say
that I’m
already proud of my emerging garlic.
Q. Death Watch is full of detailed
knowledge of hospitals, medical and police
procedures. You acknowledge specialist help in your books, and
presumably also
‘walk the ground’ yourself. Is research an aspect
that you enjoy in writing, or
is it the plotting and actual writing that give you the most
satisfaction?
Research
is terrific fun isn’t it? Largely,
I suspect, because it is so much easier than actually writing. Colin
Dexter
always says that if he is tempted to do research he resists, makes it
up
instead, and then checks when he has finished the book. My plots tend
to have a
technical nugget in them, and that needs to be right, and I’m
not half as
clever as Colin. I am haunted by a book review I read many years ago by
Clive
James in which he pulled apart some hapless writer – pointing
out that every
reader can tell the difference between research and knowledge. Ouch !
If I’m
going to take the reader into some specialist area I try to read a lot
on it,
get inside the subject, so that when it comes along in the book it
feels
natural, and unforced. But I use my own time for this research
–as it were –
rather than writing time. If you use writing time it is all too
frenetic, and
artificial, and it sort of thuds on to the page. The reader will spot
that, and
just think ‘Cut and paste!’.
Q. The plot of Death
Watch is labyrinthine, and yet
it all comes together with a Minotaur of a denouement. Do you
‘know’ the ending
before you begin the novel or do you find it on your way there once
Shaw and
Valentine get moving?
Before
I write I have a planned version of
the book on my blackboard in my office at home. But the ending is never
the one
that eventually gets written. I think it’s important to know
where I’m going
but you don’t have to stick with the destination. It sounds
very inefficient
but the process, for me, is one of constant revision of plot. I think
other
writers can hold a complete plot in their heads and make it work. I
have to say
that is totally beyond me.
Q. You skilfully
blend the initial case, Bryan Judd’s murder, with the
unfinished business to do with Valentine and Shaw’s father,
which adds another
impressive dimension to the story. It seems to be resolved in Death
Watch but do you have
plans for future novels in this
series, in which their relationship may take another turn?
The
back story which dominates their
relationship is finally, and completely, resolved in the third of the
series,
which is due out next year. Running an over-arching story through three
books
is a challenge – which is a nice way of saying I ended up in
screaming fits
trying to get a suitable resolution. So I don’t think
I’ll do that again – not
over a series. But I think the relationship between Shaw and Valentine
is one
that has to keep evolving. I think the cliché that the
characters in whodunits
have to be sort of fixed – in aspic – is wrong. I
think modern readers of crime
fiction can easily embrace the complexities of changing relationships. So I think things will
alter between them,
and there will be more tensions. But
I
don’t think they are ever going to like each other.
Q. And finally, when
does the next Shaw and Valentine novel appear?
There’ll be a lot of readers out there wanting to know,
including myself. Thank
you very much for answering my questions – that allotment
shed is growing a
terrific crop of novels.
Thanks
for the questions, they’ve really
made me think. Death Toll,
which is
finished, will be out next February. And there’s another
being grown by the
shed as we speak. Same bed, but this one’s got a very nasty
spikey flower.
DEATH WATCH,
published
by Penguin £7.99 pbk. Released February 25th 2010
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